The curtain of feelings

Encrusted by diamonds

The hardest thing on planet earth.

But inside she is frivolous and feeble as a frail.

Inside the diamond curtain

Tons of feelings prevail!

Look into her eyes

A spirit longing to be leashed

She is clenched by pain and misery

Grasped by  pitiful feelings

Even now,after so many days,

she is holding on to a person Who has let go of her;

making her feelings worsen..

Outside she seems happy,cheerful and untroubled

But,Inside the concealed veil Echoes of silent cries  .

Only Visible to people who see with geniune eyes!

People feel free to critic this poem and let me know asap!!

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2 thoughts on “The curtain of feelings

  1. This is very creative.
    Many people walk around with masks or veils concealing their feelings inside. In some situations this is helpful, but feeling so much without being able to express it truthfully is difficult.
    My writing started out as a way to express my inner feelings when there was no other avenue. If writing works, then continue, try new ways of writing and be bold – write without fear!

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