Unexpected

Hello…..I’ve been away for a long time,By long ย I mean loooooooong time.Oh god!2 years…anyway I’m back now,Hope life is treating you well fellas…

Gone are the days
I didn’t care about anything
Although I know
What I want is now vanishing.

Happy now?
You wanted this right?
You knew I wouldn’t stand a chance
Didn’t tell me.
Now,will I let you go out of my sight?

Walk just one step more
Slipping on my tears
Walking on my roof of hope
Which just shattered and fell because of you
You didn’t know,did you?

Roses were red๐ŸŒน
The sky was blue ๐ŸŒŒ
Did you except
It’ll come back
and hit your face too.

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30 thoughts on “Unexpected

  1. Omg, I love the way you write, maybe we should collab and do something together, I think that would be a really good thing to do. Just a suggestion though

  2. For a young poet – and one who disappears for some time – you have some very strong poetic ideas. Keep experimenting with language, and best of luck to you.

    Marie Marshall
    author/poet/editor
    by Dundee, Scotland

  3. roses say i love you,
    violets with sweetness,
    I’m sure say it too.

    eyes speak silently,
    truth found in their depth.
    loves plight what ere it be.

    eyes shut, can hide truth.
    look deep into each others.
    if you both see love,
    then say, “I love you very much”.
    if the eyes still hold true,
    don’t change your old love
    for someone new!

    don’t forget,
    music is the food of love,
    poetry, loves instructions,
    write on!

    Loved your poem, indeed it inspired me, thank you!

    PS Look out for a pingback ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. the third para impressed me the most.hell a lot of imagery was given there.dont rant about your failures the best way is to let it go.and one thing i have noticed dont give a damn about what other’s feel.u know who your are keep on with that.others will try to hurt you knowingly or unknowingly but it depends on you.it is YOUR life,YOUR day,YOUR future,dont let anyone spoil it.
    Love and regards,
    Jaelyra Reneris

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