Hello…..I’ve been away for a long time,By long I mean loooooooong time.Oh god!2 years…anyway I’m back now,Hope life is treating you well fellas…
Gone are the days
I didn’t care about anything
Although I know
What I want is now vanishing.
Happy now?
You wanted this right?
You knew I wouldn’t stand a chance
Didn’t tell me.
Now,will I let you go out of my sight?
Walk just one step more
Slipping on my tears
Walking on my roof of hope
Which just shattered and fell because of you
You didn’t know,did you?
Roses were red🌹
The sky was blue 🌌
Did you except
It’ll come back
and hit your face too.
I love music 
Welcome back.
Write like you were never away. Write each day.
Thank you,thank you 🙂 I will surely
write
Powerful stuff, makes my insides bubble like lava 😮
Thanks 🙂
Wow…you are good…got me in a mood…keep up the good work😇
Thanks
Wow…. you have depth…!!! Read your few more writing work…Amazed!!!
Thanks.so kind of you.have a good day ahead
Omg, I love the way you write, maybe we should collab and do something together, I think that would be a really good thing to do. Just a suggestion though
Yeah you’re absolutely right
We’ll collab soon enough
Have a good day 🤗
For a young poet – and one who disappears for some time – you have some very strong poetic ideas. Keep experimenting with language, and best of luck to you.
Marie Marshall
author/poet/editor
by Dundee, Scotland
Thank u thank u…😉have a good day.
roses say i love you,
violets with sweetness,
I’m sure say it too.
eyes speak silently,
truth found in their depth.
loves plight what ere it be.
eyes shut, can hide truth.
look deep into each others.
if you both see love,
then say, “I love you very much”.
if the eyes still hold true,
don’t change your old love
for someone new!
don’t forget,
music is the food of love,
poetry, loves instructions,
write on!
Loved your poem, indeed it inspired me, thank you!
PS Look out for a pingback 🙂
Thank you so much for taking time to read my poem and commenting.🤗
Have a fantastic day ahead🙄
My pleasure, 🙂 may you have a super rest of the week! 😉
This is really good 🙂 😊
Thanks for the support 😎 Have a fabulous day ahead🤗
You’re welcome.
and wish you too a beautiful day ahead 🙂
Its a really nice poem, loved it
Thank you,so kind of you.Have a good day
the third para impressed me the most.hell a lot of imagery was given there.dont rant about your failures the best way is to let it go.and one thing i have noticed dont give a damn about what other’s feel.u know who your are keep on with that.others will try to hurt you knowingly or unknowingly but it depends on you.it is YOUR life,YOUR day,YOUR future,dont let anyone spoil it.
Love and regards,
Jaelyra Reneris
Thanks Jae…..I’m really happy that your words help me whenever in need…..I’m really grateful 😀
the last stanza! wow! that was very f*king awesome way to end it! 😀 🙂 keep it up!
Yeah,i’m pretty proud of it too.👍
Thanks
Nice. What did you get up to in those two years?
I got tied up in school work so much that I completely forgot I had a blog…After that a looong vacation and this thought stuck my mind OMG! I had a blog…Thank you for the comment 🙂
Elegant and Invincible.
Thanks thanks 😀
Nice one! And welcome back!
Thank you indeed