Although it seems like the future is a blur,
Mountains to cross,dramas unfurl
Passenger seat,The world’s moving too fast.
Stop the train and I’ll go see
Better view from the outside
When my wings are set free.
Pretty much like a graffiti wall
Seeing,the colors stealing it all
Enjoy now,we’re wild and free.
Anything can happen,
To a sailor in the sea.π£
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Lovely poem.
Thank you so much π
Beautiful poem. Awesome imagery. I’m a disabled Marine and have been to see so I can picture this.
OH really..thanks you for your kind comment.The world needs poets like you. Have a fantastic day ahead π
a sailor at sea
hear not the siren’s singing
their hunger songs
~~
sailor you break me
each time you leave our shores
return soon… mend me
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a drunken sailor
many a tale could tell
but he’s lost his tounge
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a sailor… late one night
found his house in darkness
public house… closed
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Loved yours, inspired mine, thank you.
Mick
Thank you π
My plearsure
Wow…glad the poem inspired you π About your poem ,the flow was so smooth, its such a great example of an exemplary work and good display of ur skills as a poet.
Keep it up π
Thank you, my pleasure!
WIll check it out soon π
I hear a subtle rhythm in what first appeared to be prose statements. I read, step out of yourself and the narrow corner of the world you’ve put yourself in, and the future will be that much more open.
Thank you for liking my poem “Their Machinations”!
True….I agree with you..Thank you for the comment π
Great and Eternal rhymes.
Thanks for the comment made my day:) π
Now I want to go out to sea. Beautiful!
Thank you so much for your kind words.. π
Dear Founderofilovemusic,
This poem is definitely going into my favorites!!!! XD
I like all your writings,it’s full of feelings and the spontaneous overflow of powerful emotions and sentiments are incredible!
“In the moonless darkness of words the dreamers vanish,
Beside the river of discord the oceans did vanish
See the shadows of ourselves,love for poetry will never diminish
For all the poets whose talents will never vanish.”
Take care
Thank you Alex,I appreciate the kind words.Have a fantastic day. π π
I absolutely love this poem and the imageries it invokes! π
stellar work
Thank you. I appreciate the kind words. made my day π
Wonderful! I love the spirit of adventure in this poem! Indeed anything can happen to a sailor at the sea!
True that..thank you for taking time to visit my blog π
My pleasure!
poetic expression in true sense
Thank you for the appreciation…. π
I really enjoyed this poem thank you for sharing!
thanks π
What a beautiful image you paint with your words!
Thanks, means a lot to meππππ
Youβre very welcome β₯οΈ