Didn’t tell a word but they understood,
That is how our friendship looked.
Secrets,laughter,codes and fun.
The one who had wild imagination.
The one who made me belong.
The one who had nice talks,but less communication
But we have all grown apart,
Our worlds don’t coincide anymore.
New friends,different paths,different destinations.
Tears roll down for they were the ones that count.
Fights,misunderstandings,endless talks
Have now been replaced with sweet memories
I miss them all,but we’re too far.
Not by distance,but by our hearts.
Best friends forever-Thirteen to fifteen.
Now Im seventeen,the friendship is missing and now totally unseen.
Our talks are now few and far between.
Miss them ๐ฆ
Great work! Such an age of bonding and loss
Thanks
A sad heart troubling poemโฆ Nice concept and plot
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Awww ๐ฆ this is nice
Thank u
Nice beautiful spirit… I love it. Peace, light and love โค
Thank you for checking out my blog ๐
No problem I will be reading more of your beautiful work
Loved this! Brought back a lot of memories of friends I lost. Later we reconnected. I hope this happens to you. Look forward to reading more.
Thank you so much!I wish it happens too ๐ ๐
We may move on but we don’t forget and sometimes mourn. Nice poem ๐
Yes very true.thank u 4 d feedback ๐
Evocative
Mournful
thank u
Awwwโค๐
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Not all friendships last. Some are brief but they give us much.
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Aw, beautiful, so sweet, bitter-sweet, but not sad really because that’s the way the world turns and you’ve got those happy times to look back on and you’ll have them again, perhaps with different people ๐
Precisely. Thanks
Wow! Not the subject I had originally thought from the title.
It really grabbed me by surprise.
A poignant reflection of adolescence (:
Raviera.
Awww.thank u.your commment made my day ๐
You’re totally welcome!
It was wonderful to be surprised by the theme (:
Raviera.
Actually,what subject did u think at first,from the title ?
Not sure.
Maybe an abstract piece about time. I had a vague idea of that from the title, for some reason ;p
Raviera.
lovely and nostalgic
Yup!thank u for taking time to comment;)
very nice!